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Reviews For: Ma Cherre Coeur

Arsenic336
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI think I may understand, but even if I don't it's still beautiful.
Nimnengil Parmanole
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abusevery beautiful. excelently well writen. i'm happy for you both.
Aleara Conlin
2005-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuse"You might think I’m crazyYou may think I’m sickIt’s up to youChoose as you willBut in my mind what’s happened is finePerhaps you don’t understandWhat it is I’m talking aboutAll those late nights up togetherStroking, speaking, thinking things outAnd now I know what we’re both thinking about"Okay yeah I chose a really long part but that part's my favorite, I love the flow in it. I will agree that it is a relief, and I wish people wouldn't overreact. Lol Dark sent me an email and called you my "lover" which is funny, cuz I use that in my song, but that's because the Welsh word for it was cool...anyways, twas awesome! Post your other stuff!~Dear Heart Peronette~
darkpaladin13
2005-06-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseCan't say I'm shocked . . . cause I'm not. Beautiful piece of work though, my heart is warmed by it.
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