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| Cedric Quilfeather 2006-09-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like the incorporation of a rather common parable, with the starfish. The story is good and enjoyable, and while I don't know if it'll ever be one of your masterpieces, it certainly displays your exacting control of prose. |