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| Djangotheclown 2005-06-15 ch 1,   | very nice poem...i like the flow, and also how it rhymes. *i cant rhyme worth a **.* keep up the good work |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-12 ch 1, | Very good flow and rhyming. That broken goodbye at the end, a nice touch. |
| youzi 2005-06-12 ch 1, | so so dramatic..especially the end...do keep writing =D |
| les petits bateaux 2005-06-12 ch 1, | Aww...what a tragic tale in a poem,well done! ~~Trinity |