(I seem to be reviewing a lot of your stuff. But it's just so good!)

I suppose we all wonder if rain is God's tears or really just water too heavy to stay in the clouds. I know I do, all the time. This was good!

Really inspiring, sometimes when the wind is blowing just right, all the tree's look like they are bowing to our AWESOME creator. I love the world's beauty, it shows how much love God has for us and his amazing ability! Jessi:)

powerful. :-D

Short but powerful. Nice job.

short yet really effective and powerful. I like that way that you're suggesting there's a conciousness that is causing the rain. I really like it.

Short but very sweet... I like it!. I think the overall message is really nice, and it is really poetic. Will you add other chapters?