I like this one, esp. the last line. You have come a long way in your writing in just 2 years, even though this one is good regardless of your age.

One.) The age was not for sympathy reviews, I was just telling people that it is not recent work. To show how I've "grown" in my writing.

Two.) Um...Hello, I'm a girl, and I was eleven...Sheesh

No need to point out your age if it's to attract sympathy reviews... The last line is really well done. "Gracefully" in the second is a tad too feminine though.

I love that texture in the last line. Excellent.