WELL. I gotta say that was an interesting story there hun. Over all, I liked it, Vita's a bit of a ** though. lol I didnt really like how some things in the story were described But that's just your writing style, every body is different.:D Mine suck,(From what I've been told by ** holes here on fanfic)I took down my lesbian one, because my teacher saw it, and was like. um wtf... It was a bit um lets say, even more descriptive in certain areas of action...

lol I understood calling Vita the Prince, it shows her to be the more dominant one, the the pregnancy thing didn't really make a whole lot of sense with them being lesbians,. BUT I think I could just not have been paying close attention to it. Anyway, I think if you made a little deeper it would be even better.

And, do you have a myspace? Becasue you seem cool. Like really. And your a lesbian so, I can add you to the Rainbow Apocalypse I'm having in the future.

XD reply pwease?

Thanks girlie!

very good, but i recoomend an editor
ciao
sam

aw this a good story but how was Vita able to get Amor pregnant if Vita was a girl??

aw, damn! ** great! amazing, really.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! ~.~

like, reincarnation or AU, whatever! Can't get enough of your story!

brilliant stuff.

hahahaha! God, they have sex a lot!but hey, who's complaining?

Aw damn it, i freaking love this chap! nice! very nice!

wha- i can't believe i'm actually crying...

holy **. I love this chap!good stuff... very good stuff.

aw... how cute! I love how they meet! *jumps around then reads next chapter*

That was one of the best chapters yet! I practically got chills. I hope the next one is up soon. Keep it up!

You know this story is awesome very strong!hm... I don't trust that Lazar either, hope Vita rips him apart *evil growl*You know it really SUCKS 'we' can't put in intense Lemon *roll eyes annoyed*Anyway way to go,hope you update real soon^^

I very much enjoy this story. I hope that you continue to be inspired by your muse and write more wonderful chapters. By far this is one of the best stories I have ever read. No lie.

Please go on whit the story! I like it very much! Would that I could help you and give you any ideas but I'm not very good in story's so, sorry.

I like the story, and no, it didn't seem like it ended there. The way you worded thigs made it seem like there was more. Anyway, youre summary and prophecy says more is coming.

Its a good story good job.

Fera