lol, I like the summary; "this is not a metaphor." Like a warning or somethin. Amusing. So, the poem itself is good for it's description of something so...literal. :)Nice job.

I clearly don't think of this poem being a metaphor. It's just not right for it to be one. It's too mature just to be some kind of joke. Pah! The last reviewer said practically everything I was going to say! ...Grr.

We go for so long use to the place being fucked up that it becomes the norm. I like this..it's simple and I'm a big fan of literal poetry. People are so in LOVE with metaphors their poetry turns into a joke or some kind of equation. Not good for my brain-cell depleated brain. damn.