I quite enjoyed reading this story. I think moments like these are things a lot of people can relate to. Though simple, it "hits the spot". It's also not too common to see romance stories written by guys. I liked reading from the guy's point of view. Well written. I'd like to see more.

Wow, i really like this... it's really great to read a romance story from a guys perspective, instead of the usual girls perspective. It's really sweet actually. Make sure you write more...