beautiful ending!I really enjoyed it. Don't be so hard on yourself, your pretty good!

if ever my assumption is right then weren't you pretty young? if ever it's wrong, then ignore just ignore my first statement. don't hate yourself, dear, you might hate everything else too.

the ending just surprised me; i didn't think it would end like that. amazing poem as always. your poems just blow me away.

EB

Omfg how dep man

Very powerful and full of emotion. Excellent job!

Oh wow, what a well written poem, but so so sad! *sobs*. Aww, how I can relate. You are talented!

Write on!

Anna