My fellow Chibi...you have made me so proud! Whee! The great thing about losing all my characters but one (Nanashi) is that I can see what others see in my own characters! I guess losing is good? Anyway, you have described Haku's conflicting personalities from the shy little girl to the heroic being that she turns into as Danzaiver very well. There's only one problem with it all...Danzaiver is spelled without the 's'. As I read it here were my thoughts...

"S? Okay typo...""Another S? Chibi-chan is...slacking?""Oh Chibi-chan is slacking!""Another one!? What is this!?""I need to find a rolemodel that spells better...""I'd better just tell her..."

But either way...it's all good!

Holy crap, Terryll!! So this was the surprise that you were talking about! *faints* Oh my goodness, you practically had them all perfectly in character, and of course, Yumi was great! I just love her personality and everything, of course, and I just loved the way that you written the entire thing! Also, the way that you switched POVs was pretty effective, and I think that Nakigo was pretty in character as well. Awesome job on this one, and it was nice and lengthy. Damn, this makes me feel ashamed of my own work :( But poor Yumi. I feel so bad for her. The way that she still aches for Aia is sad, and then Iiwa-chan had to take Aia away from Yumi. I think that might have been the last straw that snapped Yumi's sanity, before she became the psychopath she was. Oh, and I love the way that you described the snowy landscape so beautifully. I totally love it, and I'm glad that my scenes with the rain have inspired you to write something TIHS beautiful. Wow, and I think it is perfectly fitting for two assassins to be fighting in a snowy landscape too. But, oh, there are many things that I wish to say about this, but I don't think I can truly say how I feel about this fic without sounding like an idiot ^_^ But seriously, I loved the little surprise you thrown into the story with Sasuke and Hina, and I'm glad that you've taken the liberty of writing them in there with my all favorite character, Yumi!! Gods from above, I LOVE Yumi! And also, you captured the interaction between Rie and Nakigo PERFECTLY, and the writing style was truly reminiscent of the great Kakyou Takashiro's own writing. You've definitely got talent on this, and I'm sure that everybody else will have to agree on this, also. The interaction was just beautifully executed, and everything in this story is pitch-perfect, from the dialogue to the description and just the interaction among the characters. But. Wow. I don't know what else to say. This is just magnificent work, and you're writing style is beyond a caliber where I can't offer any kind of constructive criticism to make it any better. And you produce such a masterwork in such a short amount of time? Wow. This is truly amazing, and I think that I found myself too stunned to say anything more.

Heather

*Gives Angelstaff a big hug* Oh my goodness! You caught Moriko in her prime! That's exactly how she was trained! (you'll see in chapter four once I finish writing it) It was an honor to have her fight against your character! WHE!

Very well done, Twisted-sama! You portrayed Zin brilliantly! From his fighting style, to his smartass attitude, you got it all. Perfect way to end the fight, too. Wow...I'm still getting over the fact that one of my characters got to face off against Aia! I don't even care that he lost. Well, once again, wonderful job. It was an honor for you to use one of my characters.

Well Teryll, that was a great first fight as well. I have to admit it was a bit short, but I suppose you don't want Aia showing all of her moves in the first round. Anyway, it was very descriptive, and it never sounded boring or choppy (like mine usually have the unfortunate tendency to). Well done.Man, this is going to be a long event.Peace out!

Excellent work, Terryll-sama! You did a great job with the trasitions between the characters' origins stories to the Tatakai. I can't wait for the fights to start!~HeavenDemon

*bows* Amazing. I love it so far, I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Hey! I was interested in seeing what would be the prelude to the Tatakai. I love it! The way you mixed every character with their story, plus the whole story about the Tatakai itself. I never got a chance to fully digest the first to compare, but it seems cool so far. I'm happy to see that this is up and running now. This is so cool!

-Yin

Terryll-sama in all honesty, I read through it and I was thinking, 'Where were my characters? Did they get lost in Terryll's head?' I read through it again and saw Mikazuki. 'One made it...' However this was a great chapter to the story! And I'll have to say you caught Mikazuki's mind quite well. I can't wait for the fight to start! And thanks for your vote on my poll! Time for me to go whe! All the way home!

Chibi-Ake's killer siggy! "You have the right to remain silent! Anything you say or do will be misquoted and used against you in the court of law!"

Wow, so it has finally begun now.BTW Terryll; nice job putting this together. That must've been pretty hard, reading about the characters from all of the different stories we have. It was a very good beginning to what will hopefully be the most impressive event on fictionpress.I can't wait for the first fight!Peace out!

wow. this is a really great beginning! looking forward to what comes next. ^^

I am really intro rested to read this story but i dont understand how to it's a confusing format, and i know you all are good writers could someone drop me and e-mail or somthing? Plz and thank you.