This is a decent poem. The one line, "Or maybe i should take a gun and blow my brains out" doesn't really flow, but everythingelse does. You are a talented writer.

I know the feeling of forgotten birthdays all too well and I'm sorry no one, apparently, remembered yours. (Happy Belated Birthday btw). Good strong piece . . .reminded me of birthdays past. Good work.

Disturbing yet honest...a nice twist on sweet sixteen.