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| MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 2005-06-13 ch 1, | This is an interesting poem. You have a strong vocabulary and express emotion well. Keep writing. |
| Wainwright 2005-06-13 ch 1, | made me giggle (it was meant to wasn't it?) Liked the "all hate in harmony", has hints of the "love will tear us apart" about it And the last lines were like a playground chant. Snappy- very good. |