Conveys well the fleeting of life. So pained.

do me a favor: re-read nature's chaos. Nothing may last forever,but that's not what life is about. have fun for as long as you can, dont let little things bother you, because they are just little things. (and if the gaping hole was caused by "you know who", then it really IS a little thing, what a ** **), ANYWAYS, VERY well written, this is going on my favs list, nice work steph!

Peace and Chicken Grease

i like the line "love never wanted me" ...very pretty line...

the rest of the poem made me think of Behind These Hazel Eyes by Kelly Clarkson for some reason O_o Strange...ah well, nice poem.

i love the last two lines, nothing lasts forever. thats very true. nice lesson learned here, and nice free verse... i like the way you expressed what you wanted in a fashion that isnt too angry or sad. a nice and "clean" manner. awesome. ;)