oh man! this is such a great story! Tapula was so evil and manipulative! ugh...
you create such great characters! they stick with me and everything ^_^
thanks for another great installment

i liked it a lot, especially the twist regarding one of the new characters. other than the twist, this one felt slightly more straightforward than the innocent. that's not really a bad thing but it went by faster.

-arnelblake B.

Haha, I like it, even if I did just realize there was a sequel to The Innocent.

*slow smile* Perfect ending, just right. *bows* congrats on another excellent completed story.

is that the end of that story? I liked it. there was a real confusion that was all cleared up in the end with out people being able to guess it beforehand. That's how I like it. Of course, it's not only me that you are writing for. so I accept all of the things that didn't quite fit my perfect veiw. But that's what makes it interesting, of course!

Pheonix's mind is clouded by a mind. Myst cares, but she has pride and she also has little to no proof. Pheonix has every reason not to think that she is not good and kind. Tapula has caused unrest in the orphanage... *smiles* sorry, just musing aloud. I enjoy reading these, you always keep me guessing. I love the mental exercise.

I sense something bad. really bad. but that was your intention, wasn't it? hehe. I'm just stating the obvious now...

You do such a great job of making the characters life-like. Please post again soon.

Awesome once again. I love it.

Once again, awesome.

You are an amazing writer. I could picture so clearly from the picture you painted. Great job.

hmm. Something about this spells trouble. The People who hurt her... they probably qill come back for her or go after other powers. I liked this one. please continue. *bows politely*

Sphinx is cool. I love cats; they are so cute! and wait, so why, when sphinx bit myst, there was no blood? he usually does draw blood, from what I can gather. probably a little hint at things to come. or my imagination. whatever. I'm babbling. bye.

okay, that was disgusting. I'm lucky I have a strong stomache. why would they possibly want to take out her eyes? that is just cruel...

*nods approvingly* This is nice, though I doubt it will stay like that for long with all the hints that have been dropped. *shakes head* You are one of the few authors that live completely up to my exacting standards, not just mostly. I thank you for the experience.