What is it?

Short.

Freaky.

Comprehensible.

A paragraph!

Yeah!

OVERALL awesome.

There I reviewed you back. *smiles, NOT unkindly*

X-Eragon-X

you know it's been a month, b, right?

:) CD

B, I really would like it if you unchecked the box that blocks anonymous reviews. anonymous reviews are what allows people to review chapters twice if they need to.

Anyway... what I was going to say in my second chapter six review was that I really don't mind if you review... I'm over getting overloaded with emails... I don't really care...

Also, when are you ever going to A) update your bio, and B) put up The Couch Potato Genie? That was a funny story!! !! !! !! !!

Ah well...

:) CD

Your story has the best quality of all good stories - it makes me want to read more!

Keep it coming.

Bon chance!

somehow, since he's narrating from a long time in the future, I doubt he stays dead, B. Or is he narrating from some other plane of existence?

:) CD

Hm, all I can say right now is that I like it. Sorry, I wish I could be more insightful. Keep writing! And keep reading Buckley, of course ;)

well. no need to stop reviewing mine. just don't review every chapter. I willnot kiil you. I swear.

*thinks* actually, I may. just because of that neanderthal comment.

*grin* gotcha!!

Anyway... I think this is interesting. did you base Mary on me, by chance?

very interesting, a scifi. kind of fatalistic (I think that's the word, B)but it fits the character of the narrator.

:) CD

Cool. I can't wait to hear what they're going to do the pirates. And why Julienne's so familiar with guns (which is probably related to why Kurmana was so difficult to defeat), and so much more! I hope you update soon, I'm so excited!

Why is Collins worried about making the delivery on time? Does he truly plan to deliver Julienne to Earth? The reference to "can't remember now, in my old age" is good, it reminds the reader of how the story started: with an unknown tragedy.

This is an awesome story, please update soon!

Awesome ending to this chapter, it really has the reader craving more. As such: please update soon! I like your narration of the events as they unfold. You could use a little more description of the characters: all I know about the mysterious crate-girl is that she's blonde. It's hard to visualize the characters with such few adjectives. On the other hand, don't go overboard with the adjectives either. It's a hard balance to maintain. But I love this story, and I think you can pull it off.

More great fiction by Etty. Keep up with this story, because it seems to be your best work yet.

Anyway, I have a new fic, too. It's called "Buckley." If you're even slightly into Romance Comedy fics, I'd like you to R&R!!

Perfect! Keep updating, and I'll keep reading. I love the foreshadowing you use. Your writing style is fun and easy to read. I love the fact that you use correct grammar! So rare.

You have an interesting story started here, I hope you update soon!