Yea, I'm really loving this :D Please update soon, I wanna know what happens in the rest of the party? Noah or Leo happen? :p

aw i thought that poor guy seemed like a knight in shining armor...but seh's not looking for something like that, right? o i like her friend seh sounds like fun

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cool. hope to hear from you soon! =)

aw... she's a romantic... tehehe... I love books like that... I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D

wow I LOVE the start! I hope that you get some more great ideas for it so you can update soon! tehehe

I like it. Don't worry if you don't know where the story's going. That happens a lot to writers it just seems like the story writes itself sometimes. And that's good! Do continue. Update soon!

o sounds good update soon !

yeahh totally know how she feels...could you just explain what happened to her?? OHH YEAH totally do that all the time just kinda let the characters take you (i htinkk most ppl do that even if they dont admit it)

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it's really good so far. i like it ^_^ the story's very interesting. keep writing! (i wanna kno wut's between diana and leo ^_^;)