Wow, this story is so sad. It was also kind of creepy with the song. Well written! :)

Very clever. Very haunting. Gorgeously written and it is over all very memorable.

Very good job! Are you planning to continue this? It is good enough to stand on it's own as a short story. Gave me goosebumps!

This sentance was a bit unwieldy: "She shook her head to clear it, and let out a hollow laugh, that if her neighbors had heard would have given them cause to believe she was insane." I would chop it down into two sentances. Ex. "She shook her head to clear it, and then let out a hollow laugh. If her neighbors had heard her, she would have given them cause to believe she was insane." Or something like that.

Overall, excellent job!

that was good. I feel really sorry for Charlotte, though. Nice story. -Artemis

Wow...this is WOW! It's so good, Sketch! I am proud of you and your writing abilities! So realistic and morbid and scary and I heart it! Great description, I especially like the end! Dude, this is so COOL! Freaky, but still awesomely, horrifically cool! You rock, SKETCH!

-Daydream

The story is really good. I always did wonder what that song meant. So that's for telling me.

Oh very good. I like the way you build up the tension when Kat is asking Charlotte about her father, and Charlotte's hysteria. Very creepy. And the realisation towards the end was just fantastic. Well done!

btw thank you for reviewing The Ice Queen! I shall be updating it shortly.

This is really good...very creepy. I liked the way you described what the song really means with Charlotte's actions. The last sentence was especially well written...I also liked Kat's reaction to seeing the ring on her daughter's arm...she cared more about not catching the plague than about her own daughter. You may want to have spaced out the third paragraph more, it was a little hard to read, but other than that you did an awesome job!!~Sahara~

That's sort of creepy, however it explains the origin of the song. It does speak of the plague, and in away that is rather haunting. Good job at capturing the motives behind the little child's song. *claps to you*

loserz. ;)

Another fabulous fic by Sketch! I loved it. The whole atmosphere was very dark, which I really enjoyed. The descriptions were good, and the overall story was well-written. Nice job!