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Reviews For: The Wind of the Storm

Future Watcher
2008-09-18
ch 1,
Nice attempt to pull emotional sadness from the readers. However, the war in Iraq came about to keep Americans from having to "listen to the battle outside their window." You have to work to keep your freedoms, or you're going to lose them. I have several friends over in frontline Iraq, and they know what they're doing. They're doing their part for America's safety and freedom; they signed on for that duty, and it is a high and honorable duty. It's sorrowful to lose loved ones, yes, but how many more 9/11s and thousands of lives would we be losing otherwise?
Kamama Wyatt
2005-08-08
ch 1,
A well written, poignant poem. Keep it up!
Princess-anna57
2005-06-13
ch 1,
Oh such a well written poem. So sweet yet so powerful. Write on!

~Anna~
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