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Onix
2005-06-22
ch 1,
Is this about someone at school that we both know... just a question, I have a feeling deep down that i know who.i love the metaphor, It's smart and i'm gad that you have continued the series. But i think that you have to broden the description of him. But the metaphores are too cool.Keep going...
The Kendracula
2005-06-14
ch 1,
Hey, very nice ... I'm not sure how you can be museless and falling into an ocean of deep thoughts, but I knowing how you like constructive criticism ... I like the underlying ideas (most of us have been there, I think) and the method of expression.

Sort of postmodern in approach while modernist in feeling. Very nice ... looking forward to more!

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