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Lostbutloved 2005-06-14 . chapter 1
I must be completly honest. I have no idea what that was about, it was well written and very well described, but..alas, I have no idea. Maybe it is my fault, it probly is. I dont know what exaclty it is about, but I do get an emotion. Loss, wanting, and disire for somthing lost (All three are kinda the same thing...). This is good, in some of y9our poems (which will remain anonymous) you dont get a mood. Just a picture. Here, you get a blinded mood, without a picture. It was good, and the emotion was deep and thought. Very personal, as always.~Beth M. Snow
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