wow! O_O that is freaky, kinda said what I did lastnight, some of it anyways. loved it though, keep writing!!

hm...the emotion is bliss. Although it is sad, the fact that you could show it so deeply is...amazing to say the least. Your description of momvment was amazing, your shows of the character talking to herself were well drawn. Nothing was wrong with this. It was superb (and I hate using that word). Small Town, USA...iot may need a new name. That is all, wonderful, emotion, descriptive, almost magical.~Beth M. Snow