|Reviews for The Last Embrace|
| Kira Deleria 6/23/05 . chapter 1
I liked this one too. Felt like you didnt put as much as you could into it but what you did was pretty alright. With poems you should really try not to leave it to your description of it at the beginging to solve the problem of not explaining in the poem itself. It makes the poem a bit confussing and its as though you NEED to look at the description of it to get exactally what it is. Other poems tend to leave it out, what the poem is talking about and leave it to the reader to understand. With you i don't think you meant to do that in this case.
| Prince Tin Lizzy 6/16/05 . chapter 1
As before, I like the detatched sentences. It seems like it needs a little more feeling, though. Good imagery with the "ghostly figure".
| Luthiena o Lorien 6/14/05 . chapter 1
Go to to see the band. Then click on the button in the top right hand corner that says English. then click on Webplayer Eversleeping go to watch video, and click on Eversleeping. This is the video that inspired this poem