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| TenshiGosuperu 2008-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseYou *ponts accusingly* made me cry. sniffle. It was very beautiful though and the emotions were raw and well written. Keep it up. |
| Saran D. Pity 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. Really powerful and thought envoking. You really mastered an accurate description of self-injury so major props. Keep up the good work |
| Tired-of-Tears 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseMy gosh! This story just makes you wanna say "AW!" It was probably the most sad and beautiful thing i have ever read. You make your characters so deep and alive. You have alot of talent that i would love to have. it was awesome. |
| The Puppet Master's Play 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI thought I had read and reviewed this before... Anyway, this is really good. I wish it wasn't a one-shot. I'd like to see where this goes. |
| Karasu-sama 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAnother sweet ending. I love it. It's so emotional!! I'm sure that you've heard how great this story is from others, but you need to hear it one more time: It's beautiful!! --Zephyr |
| Profiterole 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis story is awesome! You managed to put so much emotion into it. Devin's life was so sad, and then Ken appeared to help him and it was really moving. "He did, however, notice the arms that wrapped protectively around him." That sentence was just perfect. I could see the scene in my head, as if it were an anime (or something with real actors, but anime convey much more emotion). And the last two sentences were very beautiful too. I love the image of the sun. (I've been brainwashed by the Sanzo x Goku love in Saiyuki. ;-) ) |
| unrequitedx 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story... its awesome~ |
| hyper leaping frog 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseyou should make another part to this. i like it. i wanna know what's gonna happen to ken and devin. will devin continue to cut himself? will he trust (or fall in love with) ken? oh this is soo interesting. very well written. leaves the reader with alot of questions, as you can see. grabs attention very well. luv it. |
| visodyssey 2005-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. I like the perspective of Devin that you have created at the beginning of this. It shows some honest feelings that seem pretty true to what you might find in RL, rather than artificially created ones. By contrast to Sparks, the third person style here is used just as well as the first person one was in the aformentioned fic. The ending is sweet, and the image of the sun to triumph over the darkness of what Devin is feeling is very appropriate. I like. :-) ~Steve~ |
| SerialXLain 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseI read this yesterday and tried to review, but it didn't work, so I'm trying again. Okay: I love this. It's so sweet and it just makes me wnat to smile. tee hee. Thanks for reviewing my story and great job here. |
| Esquirella 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful piece. Very emotional. |
| SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseAww. How sweet and sad. *hugs them both* I'm glad I caught this. It was really good. *love* |
| Kraig Havelock 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseYey! Happy ending! Woo! Mushy, but sad, and happy! Yey! Perfect mixture! |