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Reviews For: Simple Moment
Renji's Baby Sister 2007-07-14 . chapter 1
that was cute . very sweet i love brother sister stories
Sarah's State of Grace 2006-10-25 . chapter 1
I love it! Aww! That's so sweet! ^_^
dress her up in fairytales 2005-06-24 . chapter 1
^^ Wow, very cute. I like it. =)
An Inside Joke 2005-06-14 . chapter 1
A story this short feels like it needs some sort of lesson or message, which yours seems to be lacking. I like how you established the bond between brother and sister, but be careful with clumbsy word choices.
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