i like the last stanza. awesome job!

SP

This was my favorite stanza out of all of these:

I love those pixie girlsand the long-haired boysAndrogenously SexyMale or Female?Woman or Man?((I love how I can never tell))

I, too, love those out-there relationships, where they just.. break out of the generic, pretty-blonde-short white girl and handsome-tall-brown-haired caucausion male.. It makes me cringe and things... But anyways, all of these were fantastic, and I hope there are more to come in the future!

-Lav

very interesting concept. I like it.

Solo.

I meant to review this one more thoroughly, as it's my favorite in the trilogy. Music really helps me live, so I know exactly what you're saying here. Every line of this poem is great. Very nice job.

Ew...the first chapter's gross...

No criticisms on the second poem, but the third one sounds a little narcocistic. Just because you're bored doesn't mean you're wiser than anyone else.

Oh sounds HOT!

fantastic! great poem, greater poet!

SP

i can relate. great job!

SP

you are an awesome poet!

SP