I can't wait for the update. This is getting good. I hope you are continuing it. Don't be like me, who can't seem to finish any of her works (except for poems, of course).

This is interesting. I'll read the rest and give you a better review then. ^-^

Well, it was good! You can't say I didn't. I'm sorry. But I'm the first to read the second! I was in the middle of reading it when my email said I got a review. So. Peace!

Good chapter! Good story!

Peace man!

Do you smoke pot?

Just curious.

Peace. Love! TRIANGLE!

Darket

Don't worry, I know quite a bit about Japanese weapons. I came here because I've noticed your efforts against the plagiarizing ** which her name is not worth mentioning.

YOu're a very interesting and talented writer. I was laughing at the opening during the birth scene because a lot of it had funny dialogue.

"A baby is coming out of my-"

"Very well."

I cracked up. Your profile is cool. I loved how you told the story. I should have done that, but I wont because then I'd be ripping you off, and that's wrong.

So anyways, until we meet again,

Peace!

Peace famed writer who is number three on the shitlist. That's saying something! You've really done something cool to be there!

You rock!

Peace my friend

*runs off holding peace signs*

i lu vur so story alot

*trumpets sound* Ta da! I've finally found sometime in my laziness to submit a review.Very intriguing story so far! The humor is great and so is the chemistry between all your characters (especially Tentou's parents - they were hilarious in the beginning!). The pacing is perfect and I'm liking the plot so far.Oh, and thanks for those tennis tips! I suck pretty badly, so I'm gonna use this chapter as a guide and study hard!Looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^

lol gotta say the prologue was awesome. I know a pregnant woman in labor isn't exactly funny, but.. awesome start to a first humor fic. XD

I've never been much of a tennis player because I always knock it out of court, but hm. I liked Tentou's character, along with the way you described how he is at school. Never watched Prince of Tennis so I had no flashbacks on it, but it reminded me of some tennis prodigies at my own school. Cool start to the story XD

This story is brilliant. I love sports-related manga n__n. It's got a lot of potential for greatness. All that I ask is that you update :D.

Hehe, it makes me want to read Prince of Tennis again and again.

i love this, its very good. i cant wait for an update!

Oh wow! There was much, much MUCH more to this, wasn't there?! Goodness! But, as with the preview at the Group homepage, this full version truly delivers all that was promised in that brief jaunt you supplied. I really find myself liking your characters and the way you handle them with such a realistic touch. As with before, the birthing scene was my absolute favorite! But the rest of the story excels just as well. Your use of wordage is wonderfully accented by a perfectly crafted flow and pace. Nothing seems to be too hurried or too slow. Everything flows just right. I could find no real grammar problems or spelling issues...well, nothing that leaped righ out at me. Maybe that just proves how engrossed I was with your story. But, just be on the safe side, you should probably give a once over just in case. Your characters and their interaction are handled exceedingly well and you are off to a good start with their development. As I said before, well paced. In closing, all I really have to say is that I look very forward to reading more. So, I hope you update soon! Keep on writing...

See you next review!

Terryll Preston, still2twisted of FictionPress fame...

YES! tee. ^^ i was having tenniepuri flashbacks all through this. well i don't think it needs to be said, but you have a wondrous writing ability, fluid prose, and your humorous touch is much loved. this story has enormous potential, so as long as the author continues.

expecting nothing less.

kakyou

Tentou was born in the year of the dragon, hmm? So was I. Does this mean I will be unique and great, too? ^.^

Anyway, this was a very interesting and otherwise engaging piece. Very nice and very well written, also. You've definitely got talent.

Trigonometry at fifteen? Blargh. I just finished when Algebra 2 and I'm a year older. Poor, apparently clumsy Tentou. I'm glad he's finally found his niche in life.

Again, this was a fantastic piece of writing. I look forward to reading more of this.~Oni