 MintChoccyChip 2005-07-02 . chapter 1 This is one of your best fics. I will keep reviewing. Keep goin ;-) |
 ChunkeyMunkey 2005-06-30 . chapter 4Hey, I liked it. I AM REVIEWING. luvin HeWe.. X Vixxi |
 Lil Miss Emzy 2005-06-28 . chapter 4YAY! Black and White telling time, now you have NO exuse not to get your arse in gear and put up chappie 5 :D
Dont kill me! |
 Pink Rose Of The North 2005-06-28 . chapter 4 It's actually still Black Rose Of The North but I'm feeling bright today. Wha-hey!
Damn you , evil person! You won't let me know the truth! I'll be tuning in with everyone else next chapter to know what the deal is with black and white!
I think Mila and Hewe make a cute couple. Look how she's trying to kill him. Aw... |
 Areneth 2005-06-23 . chapter 3Chapter three!This story is cool! I wish there was more to read from you because my story is rather long and I don't think reading your two is good enough to return your reviews on my one. Therefore, you must post more soon!Nothing much to critique on this chapter, it was written well and nothing seemed to be out of place at all.I like the blue dragons the best so far!~AnnA~ |
 Areneth 2005-06-23 . chapter 2Chapter two! Yay! I liked this chapter a lot! The whole section in the middle about the peoples background was totally out of place, but that is only my opinion. It just seemed to take the story off track a little, like telling that information at the wrong time. It's vital, but wrongly placed. But I must say, this chapter is a very good chapter. I have never read about dragons like yours before, they are cool! Must read more...~AnnA~ |
 Areneth 2005-06-23 . chapter 1Chapter One! Awesome! I like it! I like your sense of humor within the passages, it's funny.I'll read more later, my brother wants to use the computer!Awesome start though, it's brilliant.~AnnA~ |
 Gert-Abby-Celenky 2005-06-23 . chapter 3very interesting. i like Mila's personality. moves sort of fast, but i do that too. a little confirmation on who is speaking would be nice. otherwise it is nicely done. |
 willow 2005-06-23 . chapter 1 keep writing, this is a great story, I like the mystery and also the end made me smile ! look forward to next installment |
 Cheeseflaker 2005-06-23 . chapter 3 Okay, I've just realised that there's a mistake while Mila's talking to the water dragon. It was okay while I was uploading, but now it's gone in italics where Mila is speaking, aka where it shouldn't be. Sorry if it confused you! |
 Black Rose Of The North 2005-06-22 . chapter 2 I can't be bothered signing in right now, so thank you for taking anon. reviews.Well, I was shocked to see only one review! I think this is great, especially Mila. The word 'tough' and '**' spring to mind ;)Great job, keep it up!And by the way, what IS the truth about black and white? |
 Lil Miss Emzy 2005-06-14 . chapter 1Heyaz Lauren, I love this! Seriously Id give it 10/10 on the Dingerdorm Scale and that's VERY high standards XD Lolz, update soon. I know I told you this but, your descriptions are mentle! |