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xsummerbabyx 2005-07-04 . chapter 11
Kara, Kara, you write too well for meh...lol seriously though...

-forever your happy bubble-Kaitlin
xsummerbabyx 2005-07-04 . chapter 10
aw that was sweet yet yet...something...finally got my chappie up! Not that much though...hehe

-forever your happy bubble-Kaitlin
Flamevixen 2005-06-26 . chapter 11
The first verse sounds kind of mean. Very interesting song here, very emotional. you're pretty good at this song writing stuff. The line "You got to cool for me", do you mean too? Sounds like both of you got too different to kep the relationship alive. Awesome song! Keep up the AWESOME work!
Flamevixen 2005-06-26 . chapter 10
So this is actually a song? Good song. Sounds like you had been doing a LOT of reflection after O.B. left. YOU MOVED ON! GREAT JOB! You shouldn't go back to the dude who caused you misery. Good job! One more poem to go!
Flamevixen 2005-06-25 . chapter 9
Thanks for the repsonse for my review! I wish I had gotten the chance to bit D. Webster. Nice poem, as all of yours. Sounds like you had cared for this dude deeply, VERY deeply. But I hope you're over him now, and on to soeone new. Good job!
Flamevixen 2005-06-25 . chapter 8
YELLO! SCHOOL'S FINALLY OVER SINCE YESTERDAY! Sorry, happiness outburst there. This poem reminds me of how I sort of liked this guy in my Theater Arts class, but he had a gf who was a real ** to me. I think he sort of liked me, but school ended, so I'll never know. Good poem, shows lots of emotion. Keep up the good work!
emily 2005-06-21 . chapter 11
me again, i still love everything ^_^very, very good, i'd love to hear them as actual songs, not just read the lyrics... do you play guitar? or, any instument actually? again, all very lovely
emily 2005-06-21 . chapter 8
this one makes me cry. i know how it feels to have your love like someone else... its such a strange feeling... pain, that is. another beauty, i love it all
emily 2005-06-21 . chapter 5
wow. that;s all i can say is wow. they;re beautiful, its like... its like... a beautiful disaster. i'm not saying that its good that you're heartborken, no no no... that sucks ALOT. I really loved lightning. So SO much feeling on such a small poem. I love them, and just the way you write is enough to make people feel a little twinge of what you felt when you wrote the poems. Wonderful, I can;t wait to read the others.
Flamevixen 2005-06-20 . chapter 7
Is this another happy poem? how did you know you were in love? Very well-written, like all of your poems. How many poems are you planning to have in this Tribute? Why do you call him Orange Boy exactly?
Flamevixen 2005-06-20 . chapter 6
I have a hard time wrting happy poems too. We live in a dark world, where there aren't as many happy things as there use to be. Very hard to even FIND something happy to write about. Gone where? Nice poem. It sounds like you REALLY REALLY liked this guy. I hope you'll be able to find another guy like this who makes you feel special like this guy did apparently, only he won't move 2 states away and never contact you again. Well-written poem ya got here.
xsummerbabyx 2005-06-19 . chapter 9
hehe ((gawd do I need to stop saying that at the beginning of like EVERY review!!)) Yes yes most da stuff not posted anywhere of mine is depressing too...I might post this really dumb story I wrote like oh idk maybe a year or two ago...hehe...gr

-forever your happy bubble-Kaitlin
xsummerbabyx 2005-06-19 . chapter 8
hm...so it's not about OB...yeah tells the story of meh and this guy I guess...but that's another story for a never telling time...

-forever your happy bubble-Kaitlin
xsummerbabyx 2005-06-19 . chapter 7
hehehehehehehehe...wait that's not funny...urg...not exactly depressing though...hm I'll find a word...who this review is too happy...double urg lol

-forever your happy bubble-Kaitlin
xsummerbabyx 2005-06-19 . chapter 6
hehe happy poem...I wrote a song once with my cuzzes...actually like a whole 3 while we were a band...and then I wrote more but I sent them all to her...not that I would post them anyway cause they suck...really they were just bases built off ideas lol confusing...lmao

Kaitlin
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