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| B. M. Reed 2005-06-17 ch 1,   | I love your poetry...this poem is amazing as well. Great job, keep writing! |
| underminingfaith 2005-06-17 ch 1, | "the rows and columns of numbers that board us up, inside" - I liked that line, it contrasts with the portrayal of HDB flats in school textbooks. Very descriptive, nice poem. |
| catseyeview 2005-06-17 ch 1, | loved the format! loved the spirit of the poem! the topic! - I feel you really have what it takes to make it poetry and writing...always keep going! you have a soul that needs to breathe by the pen! wonderful poem that WOW'd me again! |
| secret thoughts revealed 2005-06-16 ch 1, | wierd and random poem i do it sometimes just write very random stuff well keep writing lol trina |
| Ashley Alquine 2005-06-15 ch 1, | Fantastic - I love the last 2 lines and the way that you formatted this poem - it reminds me a bit of some of the beat era poems I've read. |
| ruthRUTHruth 2005-06-15 ch 1, | this is not a well rounded critique.well this is a TAGat least i understand this one! if i were a fellow reviewer i would feel so scandalised if i read this review |
| Munchin 2005-06-15 ch 1, | neat. I like the set up! the poem is nice. the piece is curious. good |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-14 ch 1, | Very reminiscent of different days with different scents and cultures. Nice. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-06-14 ch 1, | i like this. good job and keep writing :D |
| Aquafied 2005-06-14 ch 1, | vaguely, i remember. even though, i am not there yet. it still is nice to look back, when nothing mattered, and we didnt know everything. loved it. |