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ossining 2006-03-07 . chapter 1
Favorite line: "Go on, murder my heart." For some reason, I just love how you're telling this person to do it, I dare you, that kind of attitude. Nice. Keep writing! :)
Seeker of the Way 2005-12-28 . chapter 1
I really loved this.

I might be going thru this at the moment, actually, heh!
Autumnymph 2005-09-16 . chapter 1
i just forgot to add it to my fav list =p
AutumnRed 2005-08-17 . chapter 1
Oh wow...

I like the last two lines. It came as a surprise. Creative. And true.
simpleplan13 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
wow... really confusing and powerful... great job
StormyWings 2005-06-15 . chapter 1
This is really good, so much passion. I must say, my favorite line is "Bleed me. Cut off my life at the source".Great job, keep the passionate words flowin.
Ashley Alquine 2005-06-14 . chapter 1
Oh, this is fantastic. I love the sense of obsession in this piece.
catseyeview 2005-06-14 . chapter 1
"Fury disturbs me to a point I propose" - excellent line, thrown in the heat of passion and hate, nice! How have you been? It's been a while since I caught your work run by me...-Christine
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