Favorite line: "Go on, murder my heart." For some reason, I just love how you're telling this person to do it, I dare you, that kind of attitude. Nice. Keep writing! :)

I really loved this.

I might be going thru this at the moment, actually, heh!

i just forgot to add it to my fav list =p

Oh wow...

I like the last two lines. It came as a surprise. Creative. And true.

wow... really confusing and powerful... great job

This is really good, so much passion. I must say, my favorite line is "Bleed me. Cut off my life at the source".Great job, keep the passionate words flowin.

Oh, this is fantastic. I love the sense of obsession in this piece.

"Fury disturbs me to a point I propose" - excellent line, thrown in the heat of passion and hate, nice! How have you been? It's been a while since I caught your work run by me...-Christine