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| centenarian 2008-06-05 ch 4,  | abuseWell, that was a bit sudden and all... but yeah, it was okay. Nicely written. Danny is a bit annoying though.. really annoying when he was doing the stalking thing. But I am glad he saved her... but yeah, i am not really in the state to make a nice sensible review. My brain feels like mush. Just...good job and keep it up. |
| pretitiful 2008-06-04 ch 4, | abuseyes. i fell for the review button =) i really liked it. |
| BBx 2008-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abusebig |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-04-28 ch 4, | abuseGOD. I love your stuff. It's pretty much like... amazing? yeah, that's it. Keep writing--your stuff ROCKS> |
| ani 2008-04-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseoh I liked it :) it was short and simple, perfect in its simplicity. Wonderful. |
| complexdays 2008-04-13 ch 4, | abuseyeah, yeah, I couldn't resist the review button : ) it was WONDERFUL, definitely a 10/10! it brings a whole new definition to sweet simplicity in my opinion. KUDOS TO YOU! |
| atollo 2008-02-08 ch 4, | abuseI loved this story. It was simple story that cut right to the chase. Still though, you managed description and interesting characters. Well done. |
| Cindy 2008-02-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt would be an understatement to call this amazing. You made Joie 3-D, I could really relate to her. |
| anon 2008-02-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseThe End! You cut me off at the end!! I know it's sometimes better that way, not knowing and all, but I want to know. You built up the suspense and then you just cut it off!! I can't say whether or not I liked the end. |
| rose 2008-01-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis story was short but i liked it a lot and usually when i read short things i want more but this one resolved things nicely. |
| concerto49 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseReview Marathon Event - refer to link in profile. The way you defied romance earlier on was interesting - I mean the reasoning and logic involved was pretty good. It's realistic and true too, just a bit negative. The sentences flow nicely too. There's a lot of detail at the right places. There's a lot of mental conflict in the main character. Joie and Danny's interactions just make me wonder what's going on! They're virtually arguing about nothing really though. Unless it's on purpose, I believe the tense changes here and there and there's a bit of confusion between things. It feels a little too pressed, and that things are a little forced. A touch unnatural, like not that much, but just a bit. It felt a little rushy too - in the sense that it feels rushy but with an attempt to fix it back slightly. |
| xx Sakura Kiss xx 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abuseHehe t his was cute :]. I love those short little stories you write :] their facinating, and make me laugh. xD |
| Anti-inflammatory 2007-12-26 ch 4, | abuseI like this. For a spur of the moment kind of thing, it's pretty damn awesome. It really showed her fears of letting anyone in. |
| peanutneko 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abusecute :] |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-12-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt was short...It was sweet...and I want my DANNY! |