Oh! I felt soemthing here! Very emotional. YOu got the whole mood of it just right! Great poem!

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Hey, great poem, loved it! Only, first word: is it meant to be 'ringlets', instead of 'ringlest'? Yeah, only thing. Rest of it is great! Btw, is she at the hospital? Hm... N'way, cud you review my stories? Thanx! One more time, GREAT POEM! -Ally B.