Oh my! That was really awesome! i loved it. You are a undescriable poet love.

aw...you should be a sunday school teacher!! i mean that in a very good way, i promise. no worries, the rhyme was perfect. simple and direct, and it got the message across.

Very very nice. The wording was excellent, so don't worry.

Thank you for your review. I was hoping you wouldn't see it as extremely offensive. I don't like to "slam" people, to put it in your terms. :)

But back to this poem, it is full of wisdom! I might have to remember it when I get hot-headed again!

really good poem.. I like it a lot. it has a good rhyming scheme.. rhymes make me happy. Also, the rhythm of the lines is nice, it flows well :)

I also really like the emotion behind it.. the grumbling and whining about how people are so mean sometimes, and God's gentle reminder to love others, and for those of us who have no sin to cast the first stone.

I love! keep writing :)

Beautiful, awesome work. God Bless ya!

Needa S.

wonderful...reminds me of that saying to always take the high road. this poem really flows, works together, and takes a common verse and really brings it out. keep writing, God Bless.

Great message. Well done!

Write on!

~Anna~