Sometimes, there are things that are just ephemeral, and we have just that time to savor the moment. Short and conservative, yet full of passion, very good poem

_The Wonderer

It's rather Angsty. Very nice!

whoa! seven magnificent poems! i love all your works... they are so moving.. and ver well said... short yet very profound...i love it

Your use of words is beautiful. I like this poem, it's so imaginative and light, but very deep and expressive. I love the shortness of it too.

fantastic!

SP