Another good story that you haven't finished... I'm pouting btw... I wanna know what is so wrong with this guy that she has married that her guardian angel thinks it's a bad idea... Please update this soon!

aw, poor salem!! he's my fave character so far!! ^^

Salem is so jealous! i don't think he's gay!

Interesting! There's alot of new characters but you've identified each which is good.

it sounds interesting..i'm curious about the story..well so far so good

oo, this sounds good! ^^ keep goin, im wna know how all these ppl r related, n how he is her guardian angel! aww, sounds soo cool!

another very promising story from you! a bit short but a good beginning to know the characters a bit and the dialogue is simple and clear, love it so much! plz continue soon!-anime freakizoid X^_^XP.S. have you heard the Phantom of the Opera single w/ Sarah Brightman and Steve Harley? its the best ever!

So Salem's an angel? That's pretty cool. I wonder what is wrong. Sigh.

I usually don't like seperate POV's, because it kinda takes the reality out of it. But I liked this one.

You have a very interesting style.I like it, I want to know what happens to Jade.