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| Jeremy Kerley 2005-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseGood Poem. Now the things I write to you, behold, before God, I lie not. Great Quote!! |
| The Postscript 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful...reminds me of some troubles I had with a friend...though it was hard...I had to just say goodbye. It might help to break this into stanzas instead of mushing it alltogether...but I understand fp formatting is utterly impossible to live with. Great job...keep writing. |
| asha lie lee 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abusewell just so you know...thank you so much for writing this! cause ive been trying to say this exact thing to someone right at this time...and yeah..i loved it and it made me cry...you are truly a genuine writer too...-asha |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abusewow.. insanely sad and sweet.. great job... sad ending... we can all relate |
| Cinnamon Zo 2005-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesom poem. Excellent write! |
| Jesusfreak43091 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abusei like it, keep up the good work! |
| Matt 2005-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseprobably one of the best i've readi thought it was excellent seriously!Nice poem, good riff, cool yet sad story.CHEERS |
| Argantlyn 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Argantlyn |