Cool story thus far. I'm liking Tuesday; sarcasm is SO much fun. I actually know a girl called Tuesday. She's almost as snotty as he is.

Update, please. This is an unusual story, very different from the other things I've read on this site- you don't know where it's going, which is a good thing.

A.I.

(If you get a review from two raving maniacs calling themselves The Real RC, it'll mean my friends have taken my advice and come to read this, so I'll take full blame for whatever stupid things they say.)

Wow, i absolutely love this story. of course i still dont know what their dad did exactly, but im sure we'll find out soon enought, at least i hope so. Keep WRITING, I LUV IT!

This is really good. And I really like Tuesday, he might seem strange but I can see where he's coming from, I mean his mother obviously have had whatchamacallem to live with them before and then they just leave, so no use in befriending them, right? And he doesn't come across as a person to be nice to strangers. Update soon, k?

o.0 so we meet the enigmatic tuesday..! yay! tho, he is a bit of an idiot, no? im sure seth will sort him out.. heh. i love the name seth, did i say that already? *ugh* too tired. goin now..

**squeaks with the remainderof her voice** OMG! Hungry jacks! when i went to australia we ate there so much!... much better then burger king... um... my voice is all yuck the moment and wouldnt being showered with invisible candy be sticky? coz of all the sugar and shit inside them?tuesday is a funny little man... i love his explaining of how to use a bathroom... hehe, it made me laugh [whether thats a good or a bad thing, im not sure]

ElliKat

Many points to you for writing when you didn’t feel too well. I can barely make myself read like that and you still wrote, which just makes you even more awesome. Hmm, I love Seth’s POV. I’m not quite sure what the word for it would be, but it’s really nice to read. He’s sad (in an understandable way) and he angsts, but it never feels like some kind of ‘woe-is-me-*cry*-*cry*’ type of thing. I also love all the added in small details, like how his knees cracked when he stood and how Sam seems to always have make-up in her bag. It really adds to the characters/story. [How do I feel now? Like I've been in a bloody museum or something. Poked, prodded, pricked, embarrassed and very, very uncomfortable.] Aww. *pats his head* I think doctors are fucking creepy, so it sucks for him even more. Had to be done, though, right?

I’m glad Tania is turning out to be a sweetheart (unlike her kids, ha) because it would’ve been really, really bad for them otherwise, even if they don’t end up staying too long. Random (sort of): I think Tuesday is an awesome name and this part: [I crack a weak smile, trying to act normal. "Let me guess, you were born on a - "..."Friday." He finishes abruptly...I blink a few times stupidly. "Oh."] was the perfect sort of awkward. *lovelovelove* As was Tuesday being a sarcastic bastard in the bathroom (which I could help but find amusing.) Gah, I adored the very last line. So nice. Sorry if I skipped a bit of things, I’m being kicked off right now. I hope you continue soon.

Hello, love. I have a question. Was Seth the only one getting abused?

This story holds a lot of promise. I will most definitely have to keep my eye on future updates. Keep up the good work!

Really good story. I like it.

Argh, why would you put cold water on first? That makes the shower cold! Anyway. Loved the chapter- Woot for more plot. Yay! Characters! Woot! Love it. Update soon!

This is really great so far! I look forward to seeing how it all plays out. Keep up the amazing work, you've got me hooked.

Am I loved? lol, I'm glad you started updating everything again! My buddies are all excited that you finished Wonderwall. A lot of them finally started reading your stories and they love them! But they're too lazy to review.

yeah! i'm logged in now... um why? WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED? onto el review-o...still can't get over you saying arse... anyway..whassa Mars Bar? So confused... why are they in a police station? Ha! Bloody... sorry, it always sounds all funny... Don't you guys have Crest? okay, i didn't finish cuz i'm tired and hafta go to bed.. but so far so good. Keep writing.

Oh tis gettin interesting! I wana know whats been going on. I'm guessing that there has been some sort trouble with the dad maybe beating up the kiddies. And whats happened with Seth at school? Write more! Sianx

M, plot! Loved it. Update again soon!