'Im not a perfect girl/And I dont have much to give/But what I have, I give to you/My everything is yours'

Those are like..the most powerful lines I've heard in a long time..Awesome poem, I really like it a lot!!

Much love, Rosanna.

This is really powerful and the repetition is great. I like it a lot and I can relate. Well done! QueenVixta

Thanks for reviewing back!

it felt very dark to me. i'm picturing like, a very thorny, dark, goth seeming woods place...don't ask, i is weird. oh, something: the way you use this phrase 'my' like, in the other one you said 'my me', and this time you used 'my everything', it sounds very influenced by lyrics. it's something avril does, i think. not totaly sure. and i'm saying this in a bad way, i just sorta noticed and thought it was interesting! either that or i'm imagining things...

Great. Amazing raw emotion and beatiful imagry. I really loved it. I thank you for your kind reviews, and yes, I have written on Fanfiction as well as FictionPress. My penname there Is TheLovelyLily. I am a huge sucker for LJ Fics and anyhting to do with them. Hell, I'm a romantic, what are you gonna do? I've sort of given up on that site becasue of lack of review and such, but I am currently writtigna story on there called 'the life of a mistake' you might want to check it out, it hasn't been reviewed yet, and I'm losing hope. :( I also started my own LJ fic but there wasn't too much enthusiasm so I sort of stopped. Oh well. I prefer FP anyways I think. Anyways, great peice here, I really loved dit.

Wow, this was really really good, going in favs list..if i have enuff space >_< I reckon this would make a good song. Keep it up ^-^

wow... was that to a spesific person or was it just words? it's relly coolness thouogh

this is beautiful...i love it...amazingly well written...fabulous piece of art...you should be very proud...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

aw poppetje! I love this one! really cute, pretty, heartfelt but sad too!But even if you could skatje, never change! especially not for someone else! they should accept you the way you are! ( hahah we talked about this a Elhorst today ;)) None of us is perfect! -x-

AH. I completely love this! It's amazing! A very, very, very good job to you. *hugz* Another favorite. keep it up sweetie!!