 KingdomRain 2006-05-29 . chapter 1ohh.. i love the begining. the i have no regrets becuase whats done is done!! ah! i love it. my kind of poem is all i can say. keep writing |
 candyaddict 2005-11-11 . chapter 1breathtaking and beautiful, I think the rhyming is just perfect. I like the feel, it's simply a gorgeous poem, every line had a huge impact on me. |
 SilveredScales 2005-08-14 . chapter 1Wow... *silver tears stream down my cheeks*that's sweet, as in cool not sugary or sweet... I'm tying myself in knots.It's very kool, even the verse you used in the introduction was beautiful; very rhythmic and just kool! |
 Hidden Lies 2005-07-10 . chapter 1Great poem! |
 drunken-doll 2005-06-30 . chapter 1omg I feel the same way about my ex.The first stanza is probably my favorite. I can relate alot to it. I love how you can make the words flow to easily. it's really beautiful. Adding you to my favs.kthanxpeace @ |
 Les Yeux Minuit 2005-06-27 . chapter 1wow i like this poem it was really touching...great job and nice rhyming schemes...it really flowed and the emotion was very strong...i really like this poem! write more! AMAZING JOB! |
 breezy nostrils 2005-06-17 . chapter 1Nice flow! It was full of emotion. Keep it up! |
 simpleplan13 2005-06-16 . chapter 1::sigh:: so true.. love hte title too... great poem.. i can definately relate |
 RedXfire 2005-06-15 . chapter 1Awsome very cool and sad dude keep it up |
 S0ulSearching 2005-06-15 . chapter 1I love this...it's awsome...you write so well...keep it up.--pammy- |