I really like the emotion you put into your works. You don't hold back, yet you don't try to put something there that's not, you're just honest, and the emotion is real. It's refreshing to read.

Very philosophical, a bit sad, the realisation that you've messed up and can't go back. To make rhyming work is a rare skill, and you've made it work here.

Matt

wow, i know this very well!! very noice!!

Wow... nice poem. Just the kind I like to read, heheh. Oh, and I'm gonna read the rest of your stuff when I get more time, so yea. Feel free to read my other poems and comment on them, I should be writing a couple more sooner or later. Take care!

aw so sad and well written.. beautiful job.. we all have regrets

ahh i dont get this is it like a brake up or sum very nice job though ryhms are awsome

awsome ^_^ I love it, actually...it flows so well and I relate so much...reminds me of me and my crew...keep it up.--pammy-