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XEtherX 2005-08-03 . chapter 1
Thats good. You portray sorrow well. Wow. Thats pretty.
NumblesTheAuthor 2005-06-27 . chapter 1
this is pretty good, nice surprise ending...and why don't you just get seperate email accounts? they're free on yahoo, hotmail, rock.com, and some other places i think...or is it a parental thing? ah, well, hopefully i've been of some help...
The Sweetest Oblivion 2005-06-15 . chapter 1
aw so sad...
Slowly Sinking 2005-06-15 . chapter 1
Very powerful with the short lines and use of bold type, great poem.
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