Thats good. You portray sorrow well. Wow. Thats pretty.

this is pretty good, nice surprise ending...and why don't you just get seperate email accounts? they're free on yahoo, hotmail, rock.com, and some other places i think...or is it a parental thing? ah, well, hopefully i've been of some help...

aw so sad...

Very powerful with the short lines and use of bold type, great poem.