As far as warnings go, I'll heed that have a good energy and urgency thing going on. Considering that you're only in middle school, some fully adult writers should hang their heads in shame!

Thanks! And, yes I was reffering to mermaids...I hate them...NEREIDS ALL THE WAY!

Teheha! Mermaids! Mermen! Though, not all I know are too bad... that is, if that is the race you refer to.

I like it. Keep up the good work! This poetry deserves not ragging, but praise!