Intriguing, although I don't know for certain what myth this story refers to or exactly what the story was about. Obviously, there is some detials that are missing but other than that, it is a fairly well writen myth.

Wonderful story. A few typos, but still good.

I love the detail in this. It makes me feel sorry for Tantalus. I don't remember why what he did to deserve this, though. I better look it up before I feel sorry...

Nicely written - it sounds spontaneous, which is good. Lovely descriptions.

Lots of vivid description, very nice. The name tantalus seems familiar-I think we talked about him in english during a book discussion but I cant remember what book or what he did-anyway, good imagery with this.

Hey. ^_^This was good. One of those snippets where the characters and setting aren't introduced, but don't need to be. Sometimes it's more fun to wonder. One little typo: "In the scant like, it glimmering mysteriously, lapping at his legs as if telling him to bend down..."Not quite as bad as 'sex feet tall' but I assume you'd still want to fix it. Good job.