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| Your Different October 2005-06-16 ch 2,   | I like it. Spelling and grammar need a little work. Spellcheck is good. You might want to consider getting yourself a beta. This is pretty good so far, though. Just keep working at it. From your descriptions I can see a good writer just waiting to become great. ~YDO |
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