Hey there! I remembered something you said once to a reviewer about you having stuff her, so I popped over. Hope you don't mind. I'm kinda stuck on my next chapter so I'd thought I browse around.

This was really great. Such the talent you have for writing. Imagination.

I like how you are getting us to think about what the situation might be. Could it be he's cheating? Or being transferred to another city perhaps? It makes us think, and that is very good.

Lovely!Meredith

I like this. you showed the tension very well.My initial thought of what the situation was is that she's pregnant, but looking over it, it doesn't seem likely. I'm leaning towards now more of a he's-cheating-on-her something, but I could still be wrong. He seems more apolgetic, and she seems angry and devastated.Very well written, you have to tell me what the situation actually is.Good job.