this is sweet, and i can definitely feel the passion...basically you've met every writer's goal with this- congrats! (oh and thanks so much for the review)

works well! ive much enjoyed this one!

Nicely done! I thought it was well written keep going!

This is short but deeply emotional. You convey the feeling very well. Nicely written.

I loved the message it seems so..soft and gentle, I like it a-lot.

( Thanks Once )

this is touching. True love's touch. I love this.

Sorrow

This is great, awesome work!