ooh... i like this one... the feelings... so deep...

That is a great poem, I like that it's almost as though you are talking to yourself. I know how that feels quite well. People ignore me a lot also. That's the reason I write! You are a very moving poet, I am quite impressed.

It is confusing a bit... but i get the feeling behind the words.

Pretty, and it has quite a magical feel to it.

how can you say my stuff is good, when you so obviously outshine me?...this was great...keep writing

I like the brackets - they create the impression that there are two people talking instead of one.

Nicely done. Quite emotional. The flow worked well too.

~Magnus

this is really good. I love this one. very touching. thanks for the review. I'll be sure to read some more of your work sometime.

~Sorrow~

Great job..very abstract, I like it a lot..

interesting.. i liek the parenthesis thing

I really iked this one. It was so hazy and powerful. This felt very heavy and your emotions seemed so bare. I loved it!

Deep and powerful. Love the way you've set it out. Great piece. queenvixta

i like it great job keep writing 4 eva and always really great job once again thanx 4 the review

Scarred Heart

it seems a bit like you abused the () thing a bit...but i still liked the effect of this..i'm a fan of brackets too..haha..loved the first stanza...really intimate...hmm..keep writing =D

this is beautiful. really, powerful and ultimetely just heart rendering. don't we all go through this?

~* noelle