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| ScarletDreamer 2006-04-07 ch 1,  | abusebeautiful. :) Very beautiful. I love your word usage! It's quite a bittersweet poem. As though to say, "You hurt me, but I'll be just fine, b/c i'm strong." :) BRAVO! |
| Matthew James Current 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAh it is always interesting when a writer stretches her arms and touches poetry. You express yourself well and have a talent with crafting a story, but remember the best poems come from the heart and do what you do best. Telling a story with poetry is fine, but perhaps your niche is prose. The trick is finding what your strengths are are expressing yourself through them. Oh, wait, I know you! ^.^ How are you doing Phoenix? It's been a while I think. In any case I just wanted to stop by and give you a *hug* and thank you for being an old FPC friend to me. Feel free to drop me a line if you want a review or help with something or anything at all. Take care and have a good one. |
| WormsofCharacter 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis one doesn't have much of a flow to it, but the imagery is still there. You must be very good at descriptions as I will know whenever I get around to reading your stuff. |
| shimmer115 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting,gothic almost. |
| Catticus 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseit can belong to my poetry club! lol ;) ;) great job, i loved it. |
| TheKillingPerfection 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful, and sensational. There is a mystery within everyone, yet some veil it and others show it. Figuring who is speaking truth, and who is being fake is strange... It's a wonderful peice you have here, easily looked onto and easy to contrast with ourselves, and how we think. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseFantastic! Well written, cool! Write on! ~Anna~ |