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| Bleeding Paper Stars 2006-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseDude, I loved it. and, I wish I'd heard of you earlier, as is... Before June 16? So I coulda read this on June 16. Because that's my birthday, and it would be like... a birthday present, only not really. okay, the point is, I really liked it. |
| Mya 2005-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it a lot. |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's a nice story. Very sad, but I it's nice to know that there's no certain end. I also like the change of POV. After I understood how it worked, I liked it a lot. I would love seeing more with these characters, but not as a new chapter, but maybe a story about them. |
| Graphiti Skies 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseActually, I like this. o.o It's not awful. It's good. And for being a short one-shot thing, it's got a good plot and deeper meaning. You could turn it into a story and it would be awesome. ^.^ |
| xanthofile 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseheh, not bad, once i got into the whole rhythm of it. not too shabby at all! |
| jma 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseNot awful, just a bit foggy. I think it confuses a bit, but is rather appealing in the way it does that. ^_^ |
| NNA 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abusePSLPB: Incest is wrong, children. I-*tasered*DW: Ah shut up old man. Let the boys have their fun. *contnues to taser while laughing madly* NNA: A bit short.. and the whole twincest thing reminds me *uncomfortably* of a certain someone we both know, but otherwise good job. |