 Bleeding Paper Stars 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Dude, I loved it. and, I wish I'd heard of you earlier, as is... Before June 16? So I coulda read this on June 16. Because that's my birthday, and it would be like... a birthday present, only not really.
okay, the point is, I really liked it. |
 Mya 2005-06-18 . chapter 1 I like it a lot. |
 Naomi Schemer 2005-06-17 . chapter 1It's a nice story. Very sad, but I it's nice to know that there's no certain end. I also like the change of POV. After I understood how it worked, I liked it a lot. I would love seeing more with these characters, but not as a new chapter, but maybe a story about them. |
 Graphiti Skies 2005-06-17 . chapter 1Actually, I like this. o.o It's not awful. It's good. And for being a short one-shot thing, it's got a good plot and deeper meaning. You could turn it into a story and it would be awesome. ^.^ |
 xanthofile 2005-06-16 . chapter 1heh, not bad, once i got into the whole rhythm of it. not too shabby at all! |
 jma 2005-06-16 . chapter 1Not awful, just a bit foggy. I think it confuses a bit, but is rather appealing in the way it does that. ^_^ |
 NNA 2005-06-16 . chapter 1PSLPB: Incest is wrong, children. I-*tasered*DW: Ah shut up old man. Let the boys have their fun. *contnues to taser while laughing madly*
NNA: A bit short.. and the whole twincest thing reminds me *uncomfortably* of a certain someone we both know, but otherwise good job. |
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