you're a very talented writer! :-

The greatest portion of this poem is, "The sword is cold and deadly/but it doesn't stand alone." A very clever line, and I believe it's what makes this poem a good one. Nicely done!

Favorite line: the combination of "The wall is cold and lonely" and "The sword is cold and deadly." That's a cool way to put something. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

Nice. I like this.

wow. now there is something to think about.

wow.. powerful and creepy.. awesome job

This was great, although not quite as high as your other poem. Fantastic. I appreciate your poetry. Writer of darkness