|Reviews for The Sword and the Wall|
| ira 5/28/11 . chapter 1
you're a very talented writer! :-
| The Pointed Hat 9/16/07 . chapter 1
The greatest portion of this poem is, "The sword is cold and deadly/but it doesn't stand alone." A very clever line, and I believe it's what makes this poem a good one. Nicely done!
| no.peace.los.angeles 2/24/06 . chapter 1
Favorite line: the combination of "The wall is cold and lonely" and "The sword is cold and deadly." That's a cool way to put something. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| Cellar Door Mongrel 6/19/05 . chapter 1
Nice. I like this.
| WarriorHeart 6/18/05 . chapter 1
wow. now there is something to think about.
| simpleplan13 6/17/05 . chapter 1
wow.. powerful and creepy.. awesome job
| The Moribund Marionette 6/16/05 . chapter 1
This was great, although not quite as high as your other poem. Fantastic. I appreciate your poetry. Writer of darkness