   The Pointed Hat 2007-09-16 . chapter 1The greatest portion of this poem is, "The sword is cold and deadly/but it doesn't stand alone." A very clever line, and I believe it's what makes this poem a good one. Nicely done! |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2006-02-24 . chapter 1Favorite line: the combination of "The wall is cold and lonely" and "The sword is cold and deadly." That's a cool way to put something. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |
 Cellar Door Mongrel 2005-06-19 . chapter 1Nice. I like this. |
 WarriorHeart 2005-06-18 . chapter 1wow. now there is something to think about. |
 simpleplan13 2005-06-17 . chapter 1wow.. powerful and creepy.. awesome job |
 The Moribund Marionette 2005-06-16 . chapter 1This was great, although not quite as high as your other poem. Fantastic. I appreciate your poetry. ~Writer of darkness~ |
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